Monday, February 25, 2013

A critique of David's assignment on color

Critique of David's photos on color:

photo1

-Where is the pop of color?
On the globes.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Not really, but it looks good.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
Somewhat, the balloons(I'm guessing...) coming from the left.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Well exposed, all the colors and shadowing have equal exposure.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
The tones range from mid light to subtle dark.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Longer exposure, just to bring out more color.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
This photo makes me happy.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Its great.



Photo 2
-Where is the pop of color?
The wallpaper of the construction material and on the dude with the hard hat.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Yes, it does.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
Yes, the green on the sides have equal space on the photo and the mid section is mostly uniform.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
There are really bright light and strong dark tones, not too much mid tones.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
I would change the POV to look directly into the building.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
It makes me feel better about going to college and about my weight.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Just Great.


Photo 3
-Where is the pop of color?
From the rusted rebar and new rebar.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
A lot of sense.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
Very balanced, the pattern of the subject is repeated in the photo.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
Mostly mid tones. no lights for heavy darks.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Maybe add another element in the photo, like a hand or a dog.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
I feel like listening to country music.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Brilliant.


Photo 4

-Where is the pop of color?
From everything in the sign.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
No, is this a sign for airplanes?

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
No, the sign is using the rule of thirds. Still a good image.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
Mostly bright tones. Barely any dark colors.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Add some birds.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
Im bothered by the sign blocking the beautiful sky.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Its Heavenly. Belongs in a magazine.


Photo 5

-Where is the pop of color?
The rust on the rebar.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Tons.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
The subject weighs slightly to the left.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
Mostly mid to kind of dark.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Find more color.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
Not really.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Its very industrial.


Photo 6
-Where is the pop of color?
Flags, Flags, Flags.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Yup.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
Well balanced. equal weight and space on all sides.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
Mostly mid to slight bright tones.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Find someone dressed as a super hero to pose in the photo.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
Nostalgic.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Fantastic.


Photo 7
-Where is the pop of color?
If white is a color, then where it says "only".

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
YES.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
yes, the word is spread across the whole photo.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
Mostly dark, with the exception of the word.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Add a super cool car.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
I hate driving.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Im in awe and then some.


photo 8
-Where is the pop of color?
On the train.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Indeed.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
There is more weight on the right.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Just a little under exposed but still nice.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
bright tones on the left to middle and darkens to the right.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
I would include the sun.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
I wonder how one becomes a railroad engineer?

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Better than good.


Photo 9

-Where is the pop of color?
On all the fun rides.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Yes.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
there is more weight on the bottom of the photo.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
Great exposure.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
A lot of bright tones. subtle dark tones from the background.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Get a wider shot.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
I am entertained.

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Glorious. 



Photo 10
-Where is the pop of color?
The roof and sign.

-Did the pop of color make sense in this composition? 
Yes.

-Is the composition balanced? If so, what elements are creating the balance?
Mostly balanced, there is a little more open space on the right.

-What is the exposure like? Well exposed? Over exposed? Under exposed? 
well exposed.

-What about the range of tones (lights and darks) in the image?
Mainly mid tones. Nothing too dark or bright.

-What would you change about it if you would have taken the image?
Not a thing.

-Does this image evoke a mood or feeling?
Shopping?

-Overall, what do you think about the image?
Its nice.

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